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Let me be
down to the shore of the foamy sea
where life evolved
and love was born and resolved

Let me be
let my spirit soar free
and explore the knowledge of old
and refuse to do what we are told

Let me be
back to the garden and the tree
connected to the angels of the Lord
never to cross the flaming swords

Let me be
for i am done
and my minds web has spun
deceit all around thee

Let me be

Georges

Copyright: George Wright 2004

Cool piece George, a bit scary...

Ep, thanks for your comments. I don't think that it is that scary.
Georges

Beautiful poem George!

Really great! I love the form you've used and the simple stanzas - very clear and concise, still with depth and imagery.

Love,
~ Makera

Thanks for your very positive comments, Makera. Appreciated.
Love Georges