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05/22/10
Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 3:22 am
by Imagine89
Sitting on the largest rock
The stars are the only source of light
Shining on the waves
As they gently crash ashore
Re: 05/22/10
Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 5:08 am
by lizzytysh
A very pleasant scene.
Re: 05/22/10
Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 2:06 pm
by Alsiony
mnazz89 wrote:Sitting on the largest rock
The stars are the only source of light
Shining on the waves
As they gently crash ashore
I love the implication of a Moonless sky... I don't know if you meant it this way or not, but that is what I read in it
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Re: 05/22/10
Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 2:10 pm
by Cate
I like how stars look when reflected in the water - it's an interesting image of them crashing into the rocks.
Re: 05/22/10
Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 2:28 am
by Imagine89
Thanks for the comments
and Alsiony I didn't mean to imply that but it's even better that you got something more out of it
