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That's a lovely poem Alsiony I especially like the first verse


Armed with a tail-feathered gaze
Feel the healing yet wounding old world
Believe in your three open eyes
And take flight - little haphazard Bird

'And take flight-little haphazard Bird' is a good description because they do live very precarious lives

The third verse is strong as well,yes I love this poem!

'Still there's no Gadda Da Vida'

Awesome

Thanks guys

I couldn't not use the Gadda Da Vida phrase kwills ... i]oh wont you come with me, take my hand, oh wont you come with me and walk this land[/i]...

Thanks for taking the time to comment both

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