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Oh, Yes!!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:31 am
by carm
'-a---ha' is much like the
'Sunflower weary of time'.
Every time I hear -a---ha's voice
it seems to say
Now! with a crash
of cymbals!
Very pleased
and positive
and absolutely delighting
its own round brightness.

Sorry, Elizabeth, sorry Blake!
But, now I see what you mean.
Like the sunflower, when
Storms and frost batter
-a---ha's bright delight
and though '-a---ha' is still upright
nothing could say dejection
more than -a---ha's weary
disillusioned
hanging head.

"Just having some FUN!" :razz:

Re: Oh, Yes!!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:48 am
by Marisha
no need to be so negative.

Re: Oh, Yes!!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:50 am
by carm
Like the bottom line reads…
"Just having some FUN! :D

Re: Oh, Yes!!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:53 am
by carm
And besides, if this were about you, then you'd have reason to complain!

This is a poem based on a fictitious somebody I've decided to call _a___ha!

Re: Oh, Yes!!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:03 am
by carm
On a more positive note…

A sunflower somehow remembers
to turn its hanging head
towards the sun's warm embrace.