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This is nice. How about a title along the lines of . . . "As yet, Untitled?"

Hi Alsiony, I enjoyed your poem.
it's a wonderful subject.

And all of us women -
Who are with bellies full of clay

'bellies full of clay' I really like that, such limitless possibilities.

Thanks for your comments guys -

Gina I am just hopeless at creating titles! Though I like your suggestion.
I am sure it comes from an underlying (and totally unrealistic) desire to not always want to give things titles or labels - not just with poems and stories, but anything really. I know that probably sounds stupid - but even my own name sometimes, instead of someone calling 'Claire' I would be quite happy with 'Hey' or 'Ugg'

Thanks also Cate
While I think that we are all born with some basic identity and traits, ofcourse it's mainly all about what happens to the individual that decides what happens not only for them, but within the 'group' overall.
Clay is such a nice sounding word anyways, and a natural substance too, which fitted in with the correspondences I was making overall.
I wanted to get across the idea of possibilities and potential and opportunity. What wonderful and important things they are too.

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Alsiony, I love this. 'bellies full of clay" is superb!
Juan

Thankyou Juan.

I love reading your posts in this section, I deliberately look out for you

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