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A SNIPER'S VISION

Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:44 pm
by lightasabreeze
A SNIPER'S VISION

He knows how to pull the trigger
He's happy to stay on his own
He knows how to cut the frigger
who just won't leave him alone.
But he finds that corpses of children
play hell with his shooting vision.

Re: A SNIPER'S VISION

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:13 pm
by GinaDCG
I like this. Tight, controlled and with a nice wallop at the end.