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My First Attempt at Classical poetry!!!

Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:58 pm
by Harry Harpin
As winter left
our souls fell
like leaves from a
tree.

Now as summer approaches
back they come to thee and me.

Like a mad army
on manouveres
like a lost batallion
homeward-bound
we creep into a fireplace
and maketh not a sound!

Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 4:54 am
by Epurcelly
You are a genius Harry...

Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:38 pm
by lizzytysh
Is "fireplace" analogous to "Hell"?

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 7:45 am
by Epurcelly
:evil: