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When we are old

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:20 am
by Juan Juanders
When we are old
and hold each other close
breathing in the fibres
of our life's tapestry
textures of every kind
colours of every hue
every little sorrow
every little joy
weave it in
weave it in

Re: When we are old

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:17 pm
by iveta
I've really liked the sound effect of the two last stanzas...
hypnosis

Re: When we are old

Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:57 pm
by Reese Garcia
I really like the imagery involving the tapestry.

Re: When we are old

Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:35 am
by RKGoodhew
Thanks Juan... I loved I felt the roughness of the woven fabric and the delicate sheen of silk...and my nose tickled with the fibres floating...

Robin...