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New Poem by Harry Harpin
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 6:22 pm
by Harry Harpin
a sunset coloured red and blue
I sit outside and think of you
I think of the time we lay together
and I touched you with a touch
as light as a feather
I remember it as if
it was yesterday
and it was
(about half past four actually.)
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 6:31 pm
by lizzytysh
Lesson One:
Twist it and turn it, however you must, to keep it rhyming, so it won't turn to dust.
You realize that some people teach by doing, right?
Lesson Two, Harry?
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 8:45 pm
by Epurcelly
You are an amazing writer Harry. Why do you waste your time on this forum? You should be busy breaking every pencil you own...
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:28 pm
by lizzytysh
[Tee-Hee].....it sounds like the suggestions Tchoc gives me
....breaking the pencils is a new one, however
~ prior to, or in the process of......
?
Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:16 pm
by Harry Harpin
well, I am disappointed by the reaction to my latest verse. In my opinion it is quite a lot better (more literate) than any other recent one posted on this forum.
In fact I isssue a challenge. I bet you wouldnt know if a poem I write is by me or Leonard Cohen!! I will post it under a new name and you will ahve to guess.