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Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:44 pm
by carm
After a day of worry, pacification and rage, I lay sleepless, anxiety coiling in my muscles____________________________ (your turn to contribute a voice to this piece)
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:02 pm
by Reese Garcia
"After a day of worry
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor
(I hope you didn't mind me changing the format! It just made it easier for me to add)
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:11 pm
by carm
"After a day of worry
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor
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(Your turn, someone, to contribute a voice to this piece)
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:14 pm
by Reese Garcia
carm, would you mind reading my piece Fire, and telling me what you think?
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:30 pm
by Cate
"After a day of worry
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor"
who still feels the phantom weight
of your leg over my thigh
and the warmth of your hand
pulling away from my hip.
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:37 am
by carm
"After a day of worry,
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor"
Who still feels the phantom weight
Of your leg over my thigh
And the warmth of your hand
Pulling away from my hip.
__________________
__________________
__________________
__________________
(Your turn, someone, to contribute a voice to this piece)
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:41 pm
by carm
"After a day of worry,
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor"
Who still feels the phantom weight
Of your leg over my thigh
And the warmth of your hand
Pulling away from my hip.
I begged for your forgiveness
In that god-like silence
Where religious precepts
Seemed to justifiy partisan ends.
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__________________
__________________
__________________
(Your turn, someone, to contribute a voice to this piece)
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:50 am
by Reese Garcia
"After a day of worry,
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor"
Who still feels the phantom weight
Of your leg over my thigh
And the warmth of your hand
Pulling away from my hip.
I begged for your forgiveness
In that god-like silence
Where religious precepts
Seemed to justifiy partisan ends.
But I may as well have been
Apologizing to Judas
Because you were the lover
That lied your way in
Re: Consequences of this Fortuitous Meeting
Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 11:55 pm
by carm
After a day of worry,
Pacification and rage
I lay sleepless
Anxiety coiling in my muscles"
Waking up to weeks
Without you
Wearing Time's scars and Your distance
Like an outcast lepor"
Who still feels the phantom weight
Of your leg over my thigh
And the warmth of your hand
Pulling away from my hip.
I begged for your forgiveness
In that god-like silence
Where religious precepts
Seemed to justifiy partisan ends.
But I may as well have been
Apologizing to Judas
Because you were the lover
That lied your way in
Risking it all for love,
Perplexing complications arose
Why do we hastily ascribe to
Such chaste acts of coy expiation?
Charged now, with contemptible anguish
Everything becomes contestable
Each prophetic truth, dispirited
Infallible axioms denied
But above, and beyond all that
Intense anguish is assuaged
Crusading towards pure word, everywhere,
Partial and entire, you still exist in me.