Silly Haiku
Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:46 am
Fell in the cool grass
Chemicals on my skin now
Tell your dog to stay
Chemicals on my skin now
Tell your dog to stay
, but it's true 
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:53 am
You're right , but it's true .
, but it's true .Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:32 pm
read haiku just now
understand very little
Sarah, here. Sit, stay.
regards,
Laurie
understand very little
Sarah, here. Sit, stay.
regards,
Laurie
Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 9:30 pm
Why who is sarah
The most beautiful name now
Is the wonder seen
The most beautiful name now
Is the wonder seen
Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 10:32 pm
Sarah? Dog of course
Her furry socks do not match
Sniffs things in the grass
L
Her furry socks do not match
Sniffs things in the grass
L
Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:17 pm
just wrote my first haiku
it's unbelievably crappy
posted this instead
Arno
PS: sorry, very drunk and I had to post something
(I dont even know what makes a three line text a haiku, can anyone tell me -- I'll read when sober )
it's unbelievably crappy
posted this instead
Arno
PS: sorry, very drunk and I had to post something
(I dont even know what makes a three line text a haiku, can anyone tell me -- I'll read when sober )
Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:35 pm
Syllables:
5 - 7 - 5
Cheers,
L
5 - 7 - 5
Cheers,
L
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 1:43 am
Of syllables five
I mutilate seven more
Footprints on the web
Witty Owl.
I mutilate seven more
Footprints on the web
Witty Owl.Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:14 am
Spiders leave footprints?
Webs. I must look closer now
Eight feet becomes five.
Gong!
(i feel sooo oriental....)
L
Webs. I must look closer now
Eight feet becomes five.
Gong!
(i feel sooo oriental....)
L
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:23 am
Laurie cracks me up
humour from alaska sharp
I can't finish this
humour from alaska sharp
I can't finish this
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:40 am
Frogs writing haiku!!
Laughing at Alaskan fool
More than he could chew
sayonara!
Laurie-san
Laughing at Alaskan fool
More than he could chew
sayonara!
Laurie-san
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:05 am
so it was my first
perhaps it would help me chew
rotwein aus deutchland
perhaps it would help me chew
rotwein aus deutchland
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:12 am
Z~
Stepping out of haiku-dom...
My "More than he could chew" line was in direct reference to your last line:
"I can't finish this"
Not a comment on your efforts!
What the hell is
L
Stepping out of haiku-dom...
My "More than he could chew" line was in direct reference to your last line:
"I can't finish this"
Not a comment on your efforts!
What the hell is
?rotwein aus deutchland
L
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:41 am
Laurie-sanYes I know....
I was just playing along...red wine from germany, like arno was using for fuel in his writing. and are you sure it's a he?
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:47 am
Z~
What is it?
L
Hell no.and are you sure it's a he?
What is it?
L