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To the woman on the florida keys
that makes such use of the keyboard keys
and her postings are beyond repast
and incredibly fast
and she knew of the beast Hairy Tick
and his ramblings would make you quite sick
and she could sum you up in a sum
and she could predict the winner red rum
and it was the classic film of the shining
her portrait did not need refining
and she joined the club
not needing the rub
and the portrait lay undying
like the picture of dorian gray
time willnever slip away
or death will never ever decay
georges

Well, thank you, Georges......could you live with the change of "girl" to "woman"? Thanks . Do I see a promise of everlasting life in some form ?

Yep, liz, girl to woman, no problems. You will however dispel my dreams.
Georges

I don't see the change with the "edited" line, Georges... Oh dear, the dreams the dreams.....they never hold up, anyway [tee hee].

Now back to the dreams, Liz..........
Georges

Thanks, Georges ....it even reads better .