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The Third Eye

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 1:12 pm
by George.Wright
Reaching the circle in the middle of your third eye
like the centre of the storm, peace and harmony go swimming like dolphins by
motivation exists here, just for a stolen kiss
there is no such thing as a random hit or miss
and the energy here is like a coiled snake
it's tongue flashing and darting to keep your senses awake
pulses here and pulses there
you will find your actions are geometrical and on the square
who channels the energy in the third eye?
who follows the grid patterns and zodiacal stars in the sky?
and in here exists the perfect ultimate symmetry
spiritual motivation and the expression of pure poetry
energy not degraded or soiled by lust
like the perfection of beauty captured in a classical armless bust
energy spiralled as if captured and sucked into a black hole
that seems to go down to your infinate depths and expansion of your pure soul
pure energy that was driven by the virgin birth dawn
when your spirit was drooling and your subconcious was laid out on the lawn
energy that does not recognise hope nor despair
as it wanders up the white marble stairs of the mansion to an empty neo classical chair
energy that is the pinnacle of all our aspirations
energy that laid down the basis of all our foundations
and if you glimpse it there, just for a moment of your Lent
where time has no meaning and chaos will repent
soaring high above this cradle of mother earth
a new life awakens, a second birth
Georges

Good

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 3:11 pm
by Ben Kelly
george


pure perfect poetry


ben

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 3:33 pm
by George.Wright
You must like this one, Ben as there are no funny remarks.
Thanks for your compliments......
Georges

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 4:43 pm
by lizzytysh
I like this one, too, Georges.

~ Elizabeth

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 4:45 pm
by George.Wright
Thank you Liz. I think i got lucky and got it right.
Georges

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 4:50 pm
by lizzytysh
:D ~ I think it's the result of more discipline. It's showing, and I'm thinking that Ben has been a good influence for you in that regard.

Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 5:50 pm
by George.Wright
Liz, i think that you are psychic. I will do a poem on you soon.
Georges

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 1:55 am
by LaurieAK
Georges~

This almost reads to me like musings upon pondering an abstract painting. But i know it is not so.

Something came out differently here. It is 'tight' like your "coiled snake."
And full of pictures. Hope you Feel Good about accomplishing this poem. You should.

Regards,
laurie

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 3:45 am
by George.Wright
Laurie your message feels good to me. Thank you.
I knew i made the right hit, fairly soon.
So few people will encourage you here.
If you make it here, you are close to making it.
I, like others have a long way to go, but it is shorter now.
Thank you for your encouragement.
Georges

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 4:05 am
by lizzytysh
:wink: Thanks, Georges.....for such a lovely sentiment :) .

~ Elizabeth