September
Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:21 am
hey all,
i wrote this after thinking about leonard's wonderful line from 'The Street' -
'It’s going to be September now
For many years to come'
i've been struggling with it so any advice would be great. by the way i've just named my cat leonard.
September
The dead leaves sound
Like dead time falling
The world turns brown.
And dead leaves look
Like bodies falling
In clear September air.
Below the buildings
On early mornings,
The littered site
Of endless leaves
Brings ghosts moving
Through twisted trees
And smells of smoke
On early mornings,
Recalls the site
Of leaves falling,
Beneath the buildings
Where September lives
For months to come.
i wrote this after thinking about leonard's wonderful line from 'The Street' -
'It’s going to be September now
For many years to come'
i've been struggling with it so any advice would be great. by the way i've just named my cat leonard.
September
The dead leaves sound
Like dead time falling
The world turns brown.
And dead leaves look
Like bodies falling
In clear September air.
Below the buildings
On early mornings,
The littered site
Of endless leaves
Brings ghosts moving
Through twisted trees
And smells of smoke
On early mornings,
Recalls the site
Of leaves falling,
Beneath the buildings
Where September lives
For months to come.