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Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:21 pm
by Alsiony
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Re: Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:51 pm
by lonndubh
Alsiony wrote:Can you...will you...shake it up?
Perhaps something's bound to give
Maybe you'll save yourself-
Explode!
Convalesce...
Live!
Reading this I thought of The Beatles Hippy Hippy shake for some reason
Re: Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)
Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:16 pm
by Alsiony
I was thinking of earthquakes and natural disasters when I wrote it - but I like your take on it hehe
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Re: Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)
Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:33 am
by sammu5
I like the sentiment and passion behind your poem! Would make a good performance poem...
Thanks for this, sam
Re: Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)
Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:22 pm
by Alsiony
Cheers for your comment Sam!
Thanks for taking the time to to say - it's nice to know that's how it comes across - I am glad you like it!
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