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Tasting

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2004 3:56 am
by George.Wright
A taste
of freedom and the home
the dna and it's clone
the ghost and the doppleganger
the new clothes and the hanger
the smart new car and the old banger
the model and the wife
the death and the new life
the truth and the old wife's tales
the train and the going off the rails
the diamond and the coal
van morrison and the jelly roll
the freedom and the toll
the oppressed and the free soul
the vanquished and the winner of the poll
the universe and the black hole
the stallion and the new born foal
the undresser and the undressed
the truth that you so tried to supress
the sweet and the sour
einstein and the hour
the wheat from the flour
the dark from the flare
the small matter that you did not care
the covered and hidden from the bare
the focussed from the vacant stare
the lion and the dirty tramp
the mystic and his magic lamp
the innocent and the tarty vamp
and all are opposites over there
the other sides of the square
that tantalise the tastebuds in duality
that realise we are all part of reality
Georges

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2004 11:05 am
by lizzytysh
I love this one and its conclusionary message. Very clear as well :D .

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2004 8:50 pm
by George.Wright
Thanks for your compliments, liz
Georges

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 3:23 pm
by Ben Kelly
George


Truly, Mouth-Watering-Delicious

Ben

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 5:32 pm
by George.Wright
Thank you Mr. Kelly for your kind remarks.
Georges

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 6:49 pm
by Byron
George, I think you have described every little diamond and gritty stone in our journey from innocence to infinity. Thank you.
Regards. Byron.
495

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 7:36 pm
by George.Wright
Byron, from conception to the unknown....................thanks for your kind posting.
Best regards.......Georges

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 3:58 pm
by Coco
Hi George!


I liked the contrasts in this one! :) Keep on writing.

Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:00 pm
by George.Wright
Will do, CoCo. Thanks for the encouragement, it is appreciated.
Georges