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unsprung

Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 5:39 am
by elazar
i flew into a panic
where has my card gone
my crushing titanic
sweating like a common con

then the banker told me
i had left it in the atm
someone's returned it,gee
i felt the pressure in my cranium

dissipate and i was left
with a madness there
feeling flighty and deft
i strolled in second gear

i looked at the passers by
works of art all of them
this one low this one high
my mind a ragged hem

salut,
elazar

Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 3:05 pm
by Makera
I loved this 'anxiety-to-whew!' rollercoaster, Elazar. I think most of us can relate to that 'near(social)death' experience! :D

~Makera

Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 8:09 am
by elazar
makera ,thanks!
i wrote this in "real time"...i was suprised at the spelling mistakes and title i had given it when i returned to it later on :lol: a rollercoaster is a perfect way to discribe the incident. :D

salut,
elazar