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feel your brain

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 5:41 am
by elazar
the trick of wit has been
will be and is simplicity
elaboration is like
unplucked weeds that
mar a vegetable garden

slip into your subconscience
when you're there you will
know you are there
sit in the shade
on the grass or a rock
close your eyes

trace a path
to where you want
to know
strip away preconceptions
fondle your soul
feel its pleasure
in sudden awareness


salut,
elazar

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 6:15 am
by lizzytysh
Australia agrees with you, Elazar :D ~ very appealing :) .

~ Elizabeth

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 10:05 am
by Makera
Elazar~
Exquisitely and succinctly brilliant!
I think I've now seen proof of Melbourne's true worth: introspective & intuitive inspiration. 8) I particularly liked the poetic subtlety of "subconscience", also.

~Makera