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Dark Poetry Burning Bright

Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 5:59 pm
by Ben Kelly
Dark Poetry Burning Bright

Dark poetry burning bright
Into the happy empty voids to dwell in self-pity
Twilight's blue room, solitary quietly thinking
Cold coffee cups, smoking in a long line of poetry

Dark poetry burning bright
Neon melancholy sign reads bar
Ballad music, people's shapes but not eyes
Dance, stay the night, morning's not too far

Dark poetry burning bright
The rain falls in a wineglass left outside
Touched by the old dreams and nightmares
Ms Moon, money first before sorrow hides

Dark poetry burning bright
There fire once more in your blood again
The approaching ecstasy grips you fast
Love and only love is your true friend

Dark poetry burning bright
Little or no welcome and few bid farewell
Whimsical moods play to accept life's fate
Again living alone with no one to tell

Dark poetry burning bright
So many thoughts and images of loss
A cold sweat nervously grows to raw pain
The silent scream of agony's chilling ghost

Dark poetry burning bright
Somewhere someone sometimes sleeps
You won't see morning till late afternoon
Shower and the orange juice tastes sweet

Dark poetry burning bright
Ahead another loveless crowd awaits
Bloody city streets with no heart or laugh
Tropical sunsets hide the misery and hate

Dark poetry burning bright
In hells gothic shadows of grey and black
Fever trees fire poisonous paranoid fears
Now obliquely acute now circled straight, abstract

Dark poetry burning bright
Feeling being naked, fainting in church
The vicar laughs mockingly as loud as the devil
Picture school classes tomorrow before lunch

Dark poetry burning bright
You enter a danger point in the dead zone
Come back from the edge of the ledge
Come home, walk away brave poem

Dark poetry burning bright
Strolling aimlessly through the red mist
Forgive and forget the worst is over, gone
Dark poetry in books, on eyes, on lips

Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 10:14 pm
by George.Wright
Ben, you have the cheek to call me Gothic!!!
Wonderfull Poem, full of rich images.
Georges

Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2003 3:31 pm
by Ben Kelly
George

The EDGE and LEDGE were yours, but the edge of the ledge was mine.

Just a kind of cross pollination.

Ben

Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2003 5:26 pm
by Makera
Great poem, Ben...
Wonderful to see a Mutual Inspiration Society in action too! :D

~Makera

Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2003 4:04 pm
by Ben Kelly
Makera

George needs some competition in the market on Poems of Depression and we do have alot of fun exchanging rather stupid ideas at times but its all good natured fun.

Kind regards

Ben

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 9:08 pm
by Ben Kelly
George

How is your reading going, I've managed to get a copy of William Morris's
'News from Nowhere' which was the fore runner of 'The Iron Heal', 'A Brave New World' and '1984'. I have really enjoyed this book.

Ben

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 9:13 pm
by lizzytysh
What's the jist of the book, Ben?

~ Lizzy

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 9:19 pm
by Ben Kelly
Lizzy

I sent George over some very heavy reading material, just wonder how he was getting on.

Ben

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2003 10:20 pm
by lizzytysh
Ben ~

Is this to say you're not going to tell me the jist of News from Nowhere :wink: ?

~ Lizzy

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 7:09 pm
by Ben Kelly
Dear Lizzy


W. Morris was a multi-talented dreamer who could dream with a sense of reality and did manage to convert some of his dreams into projects. The book News from Nowhere comes under his romantic writings. the book was published in 1890 and the 'nowhere' is an Utopian idyll of London in about 2100?
The romance is more about his Utopian ideals more than the romance based on the characters. He preferred bullet point ideas ( Bibles) to literature and he was very active in the London political scene of the time.

Sorry I did not get back sooner but work priorities have rather curtailed my fun time.

Kind regards

Ben

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 10:48 pm
by lizzytysh
Thanks, Ben :D .

I found 1984 very unnerving, when I saw an old production of it in black & white. Very bleak and sinister. As we all know, more than a few parallels to how reality has played out. When people left the college-campus theatre, no one was talking. It left the viewer with such a feeling of alienation from everyone, and it seemed to have that isolating effect between those who had attended together. It was a lot to take in and process. Very intense and oppressive. Conversations no doubt sprung up after people got back to their cars, but it was the type film where there had to be a segue [apparently preferably of silence] back to reality. I couldn't help but wonder the basic premise of News from Nowhere, when you linked it to 1984. With the latter being nowhere near Utopia, it would be interesting to read/see how London is imagined.

Yeah, the work thing can sure get in the way of a good time, can't it :( ? Some here are equally "time-out'd" due to school. I remember those days :shock: .

~ Lizzy