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Cryogenics

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 4:12 am
by George.Wright
If you take away the flesh and the organs, there is only a frame
and the secret of realising the message of the favourite game
of throwing yourself in the snow
and the understanding of the impression your body does go
a complicated lattice of the mesh and the flesh, and the know
and the uncovering of the statue in Ozymandias of the Pharohes long ago
when people believed their physical body into the afterlife would go
and covered their pryamids with secret vents
learnt from the radiation of the Ark of the Covenant in the tent
the tears of mortality do not assist
when inspiration is immortality in bliss
and if people thought they could preserve
the immortality they then thought that they deserved
then the futility of the afterlife was thawed
cyrogenics is based on that message flawed
and the rich are basically the rich
for money to recreate that beautiful bitch
and the secret can be found in the Bog ditch without vents or stairs
we crumble and regenerate the soil
for a lifetime of hardship and toil
but energy created cannot be destroyed
and the cycle of life, cannot death avoid
perhaps the secret is to become an android
and to dream of electric sheep
and perhaps then, your soul to keep
georges

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 5:28 am
by lizzytysh
"we crumble and regenerate the soil
for a lifetime of hardship and toil
but energy created cannot be destroyed
and the cycle of life, cannot death avoid"

These 4 lines are great, Georges 8) !

~ Elizabeth

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 5:31 am
by George.Wright
They are universal lines, Liz.
Georges

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 5:38 am
by lizzytysh
Yes, I know in that sense, Georges.....I just like the way you brought them together, the first two even more uniquely.

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 1:19 pm
by Makera
Great again, George. "..energy created cannot be destroyed", that's not only scientific fact, but Real science. 8)

~Makera

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:03 pm
by lizzytysh
That's what I meant, too, Makera......"universal" meaning energy stays right here, in one form or another.

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:33 pm
by Byron
Ah George....you and I know that 'the past is another country and they do things differently there.'

Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 6:42 pm
by Ben Kelly
Dear George

Is this the latest crase 'Paisley Patterned Poetry' what will the Poetry Police say?

Some great lines and images

Kind regards

Ben
The Non-Poetry Pen

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 4:37 pm
by George.Wright
Ben, i would hope the Poetry police would shut their mouths or they will get a Glasgow Kiss!!!
Headingly yours..............Georges