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A Very Short Poem
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 8:21 pm
by Amycohentats
I've lost my pen.
I'm slightly worried because
It knows all my secrets and
Could easily leak.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 9:58 pm
by lazariuk
Welcome and it is fine how you arrived delivering such smiles.
It is not as scary here as you have been told.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 11:16 pm
by iveta
wow what a piece of everyday life poetry
sounds funnny and decadent at the same time
usually, I almost forget to take the pen
but just before leaving home
I cram it into back pocket of my jeans
catch a bus take a seat
and then my pen breaks and starts leaking blue juice
it's a bit sad because then I'm dirty and have nothing to write with
but i've just decided to become a poet a make such annoying accidents sound decadent

Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 12:06 am
by lizzytysh
That's
very cute, Amy

. Love your punplay, plus that little reality factor.
~ Lizzy
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 1:36 am
by Lion of Lions
I found your pen
I'm slightly worried because
none of your secrets
were interesting
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 1:33 pm
by Amycohentats
Lion of Lions wrote:I found your pen
I'm slightly worried because
none of your secrets
were interesting
hahahahaha good one!
and thank you lizzy

im a fan of this one myself - its cute

Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 1:38 pm
by Cate
Hi Amy and welcome to the forum
I liked this one as well, it brought me a smile and laugh.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:06 pm
by Amycohentats
thankyou very much cate

Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:31 pm
by Lion of Lions
I've lost my penis.
I'm slightly worried because
it knows all my secrets and
could easily leak.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 5:11 pm
by Cate
again!
you're going to have to keep a tighter hold on that thing.
try looking behind the cream in the fridge or if not your wife's top drawer
...oh did you look in the bathroom magazine rack?
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 5:14 pm
by Amycohentats
Lion of Lions wrote:I've lost my penis.
I'm slightly worried because
it knows all my secrets and
could easily leak.
way to lowering the tone!
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:46 pm
by lazariuk
Hi Amy
I am not so interested in any secrets that might be accidentally leaked from pens but if you ever get around to showing more pen markings like "energy of slaves" I sure hope I am around to see it.
Jack
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:53 pm
by Lion of Lions
Amycohentats wrote:Lion of Lions wrote:I've lost my penis.
I'm slightly worried because
it knows all my secrets and
could easily leak.
way to lowering the tone!
"the pen is mightier than the sword"
Edward Bulwer-Lytton 1839
"the penis mightier than the sword"
Lion of Lions 2009
btw compared to a whole thread dedicated to Jack's asshole- this one is genteel and cultured.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:54 pm
by Lion of Lions
Cate wrote:again!
you're going to have to keep a tighter hold on that thing.
that's a matter for you
Being born only lasts a moment but it is not a unique moment as many who have been through rebirthing will tell you. someone has been talking out of his arse as usual.
Re: A Very Short Poem
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:13 pm
by lazariuk
Lion of Lions wrote:
Being born only lasts a moment but it is not a unique moment as many who have been through rebirthing will tell you. someone has been talking out of his arse as usual.
Obviously you are talking about what someone told you and not what you have experienced.