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If it itches
Scratch it
Enough said.

If it breathes
Hold it
It ain't dead.

If she's there
Take it
Fix your head.

And if she's not
There
Do it
Yourself
She said

and if your name is Geoffrey
posting as Ren
check your poems
then check them again
inflict 1 on us
is bad enough
3 at a time
is just too tough

Best Wishes

Sue

PS I think your excellent poem would be better titled "Untitled 3". Is it too late to change it?

Thank you Geoffrey for changing the title from If to Untitled 3.

I also think you should change the title of your second poem, Untitled 2, to Untitled 1. Also, I think you should change your first poem, entitled Untitled 1, to Untitled 2 to avoid confusion.

I'm not Geoffrey. Really I''m not. Just curious as to why you would assume I'm him?