If it itches
Scratch it
Enough said.
If it breathes
Hold it
It ain't dead.
If she's there
Take it
Fix your head.
Untitled 3
Untitled 3
Last edited by Ren on Thu Apr 09, 2009 2:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: If
And if she's not
There
Do it
Yourself
She said
There
Do it
Yourself
She said
Re: If
and if your name is Geoffrey
posting as Ren
check your poems
then check them again
inflict 1 on us
is bad enough
3 at a time
is just too tough
Best Wishes
Sue
PS I think your excellent poem would be better titled "Untitled 3". Is it too late to change it?
posting as Ren
check your poems
then check them again
inflict 1 on us
is bad enough
3 at a time
is just too tough
Best Wishes
Sue
PS I think your excellent poem would be better titled "Untitled 3". Is it too late to change it?
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
Re: Untitled 3
Thank you Geoffrey for changing the title from If to Untitled 3.
I also think you should change the title of your second poem, Untitled 2, to Untitled 1. Also, I think you should change your first poem, entitled Untitled 1, to Untitled 2 to avoid confusion.
I also think you should change the title of your second poem, Untitled 2, to Untitled 1. Also, I think you should change your first poem, entitled Untitled 1, to Untitled 2 to avoid confusion.
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
Re: Untitled 3
I'm not Geoffrey. Really I''m not. Just curious as to why you would assume I'm him?