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this is about as generic as i can be...this is actually an exact dream i had of someone...so i dont think i actually wrote it, my eyes blinked it.

I'm just gonna keep posting one crappy poem after another, so get used to it people..

Natural Beauty

Your body
so beautiful
that when we walk
across the garden
You can no longer be distinguished
amongst the beautiful flowers

short and simple and very clear. I love it!
it's not crappy

Likewise, with Greta's comment, Matt. Very lovely dream! Perfect title.

~ Lizzytysh

thanks for the kindness.

someone should make a book called "Poetry for the Pleabians"..haha..that's my strange thought of the day..i think its a great title.