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The Dream, by Tzvi Freeman
Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:40 pm
by Minna
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Re: The Dream, by Tzvi Freeman
Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:24 am
by Virginia
I really liked this piece.
Thank you.
Re: The Dream, by Tzvi Freeman
Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 4:44 pm
by Minna
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Re: The Dream, by Tzvi Freeman
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:18 pm
by panama
this could have been a little better, anyways a great effort! keep ip up! and keep writing!
thats the only way to improve!
Re: The Dream, by Tzvi Freeman
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:32 am
by Minna
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how a house built me
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 5:46 pm
by danny
"Written in 2006 and 2007 while building a small house in a village in northern Spain, these poems are the tracks of a person who became me. Apart from the house itself, they are pretty much all that remains of him. A lot of books have been written about how to build a house; this one is about how a house built me, and I'm writing down the poems in clear for the sake of anyone who might be interested in how that transformation took place – most of all, for my friends, including, of course, those who helped build Snail Cabin." - Robert Alcock
(1)They ploughed the soil with money
They ploughed the soil with money
so that no trace remain
of voices in a story
of echoes on a stone
(2) City
Today's city is a marvellously efficient
heat exchanger that sucks out souls,
replacing them with an ichor brewed
from petrol, cold and electronic money.
Try to travel through a city
with any but the minimum of baggage
and you get caught for seven years
or until your soul is gone
and you support the football team.