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this is my new poem. it is called "Today I Saw"


TODAY I SAW

today I saw
you


Marisha


In this poem I have poured out my heart to the man I have not yet seen but I hope will provide me with the services I have been very much missing! I would prefer you not to make any negative posts or extensive revisions of my work. Thank you. Also I am not really interested in "ladies" like Cate, Casey, and Manna giving me the benefit of their "wisdom", gained over all of about 19 years!!! (I do hope you are not offended Dears, I know blonds can be ever so sensitive!)

However, if any man wants to reply, possibly wth photos as well, that would be most welcome, oh YES!

I am sorry if I misled you but I do welcome positive posts praising my work.

secondly, I have heard from a poster here who says Casey is actually a man not a woman. I didn't know it can be a man's name as well. I apologize. I still believe that both Cate and Manna are women as I cna hear their fingernails scratching when they write about my poetry!

Marisha

Your work is perfect!

Marisha wrote:secondly, I have heard from a poster here who says Casey is actually a man not a woman. I didn't know it can be a man's name as well. I apologize.

No problem. You can't see the beard.

Casey