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When The Season Ends

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 10:35 pm
by Joe Kaczmarek
When daisies sweat,
dandelions bleed.

Dropped clues and names
and little leads.

All your sweaty beads
and beds for games.
Just words on some flame's
nude screen.

Make dandies bleed
a crying stream
of bloody green.

Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 11:00 pm
by magneticcry
the poem as a whole is good,but i think i don`t understand the meaning as a whole.....

Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2003 12:53 am
by Joe Kaczmarek
Dear Magneticry,

Distance, jealousy, possessiveness, spying

Not necessarily in that order.

:evil: