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Did Ya Cry ???

The day that ya met him did he make you cry?
When he picked you up to touch the sky did ya cry? Did ya cry?
Oh, Oh did ya cry?
Did time come to an end when he silently spoke his mysterys,
washing away all of your miserys in the blood of his wisdom? Did it,
did it...make you cry, like a baby, did he make you cry?

Did your mind go silent with amazement?
Did the silent thunder crack your reality?
Did you recive wisdom and knowlage that would'nt be understood if you were to tell?

Did he make you dance?
Did he make you shine?
Oh ya I bet he made you cry.

In the life of hide and seek did he laugh Peek-a-Boo, Guess who?
Did he make you cry?
Tell me please tel me did he make you cry?

Did the sunlight shine so bright to remove the darkness from your life?
Did moonlight shine so bright to remove your life and ya cried?
Oh ya, Oh ya did ya cry?

Did you belive his ears?
Did you belive his eyes?
Did you belive his heart and mind?
Oh ya....
It still makes me cry.

Gullivor wrote:Did Ya Cry ???

The day that ya met him did he make you cry?
When he picked you up to touch the sky did ya cry? Did ya cry?
Oh, Oh did ya cry?
Did time come to an end when he silently spoke his mysterys,
washing away all of your miserys in the blood of his wisdom? Did it,
did it...make you cry, like a baby, did he make you cry?

Did your mind go silent with amazement?
Did the silent thunder crack your reality?
Did you recive wisdom and knowlage that would'nt be understood if you were to tell?

Did he make you dance?
Did he make you shine?
Oh ya I bet he made you cry.

In the life of hide and seek did he laugh Peek-a-Boo, Guess who?
Did he make you cry?
Tell me please tel me did he make you cry?

Did the sunlight shine so bright to remove the darkness from your life?
Did moonlight shine so bright to remove your life and ya cried?
Oh ya, Oh ya did ya cry?

Did you belive his ears?
Did you belive his eyes?
Did you belive his heart and mind?
Oh ya....
It still makes me cry.

did you use spell-check
did ya
did ya?

Maybe someone once made me cry.
Yeah.
Your poem made me ache.

No I did not use spell check but thank you for your replies.
I need an editor very badly, and a publisher as well to get the writtings out.
I have much more to post and charish all the feed back.
Thank You,
Paul

The anguish and raw feelings in this poem remind me of a country song. I mean this as a compliment. Nothing brings on tears like a country song.

"I asked Hank Williams how lonely does it get?" LC

Jill

jill wrote:The anguish and raw feelings in this poem remind me of a country song. I mean this as a compliment. Nothing brings on tears like a country song.


Jill

what about an onion, or someone pulling out your nose hair without your permission? or someone pulling out your nose hair with a sharpened onion?

blessings on you, Jill

your dear friend

Sue

Are you a basket case Cee Cee Mira or is that just your thingymajig?

William wrote:Are you a basket case Cee Cee Mira or is that just your thingymajig?

Well, I am a new mom. That's my favorite picnic basket ... sort of like Mary Poppins magic carpet bag.

Well, Cee Cee, long life to you and much enjoyment from baby and carpet-bag-basket .

To Sideways Sue,

Ouch.
Jill

Theres something inside you that needs to be released ......................Focus on it