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I just want a place to tuck little poems or pieces of poems. Feel free to add if you wish.


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Cinquain

Vow

submit
to your body
submit to my body
to the universal order
submit

(apologies to any militia offended by the word universal - )



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Monday morning

You laugh at my love of mint, yet
who pulled on me
~~as I put paste on brush
who bent me over the sink
~~as I tried to brush while laughing
who filled my belly
~~by the time I spit
me thinks I'm not the only one
with a fondness for mint

Cate wrote:I just want a place to fuck little poms

Cate, I find your post to be offensive on two counts. "Pom" is a derogatory word for an Englishman, and "little" is heightist.

Lord Mickey of One

Member of the Poetry Forum Military Wing

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jimbo wrote:

mickey_one wrote:

Cate wrote:I just want a place to fuck little poems

Cate, I find your post to be offensive on two counts. "Pom" is a french word for an Englishman,
meaning potato head
and its not little
its big

Lord Mickey of One

ex Member of the Poetry Forum Military Wing[/i]

Jimbo, tampering with people's original works is a crime punishable with laughter

Lord Mickey of One

Commanding Officer of the Poetry Forum Militant Wing

mickey_one wrote:I just want a place to fuck little poms

Lord Mickey of One

Member of the Poetry Forum Military Wing

This is an interesting short poem Michael - I'm not sure what a pom is but as long as it is of consenting age - good for you! There's no need to be shy here we're all friends.

jimbo wrote:

mickey_one wrote:
Cate, I find your post to be offensive on two counts. "Pom" is a french word for an Englishman,
meaning potato head
and its not little
its big

Lord Mickey of One

ex Member of the Poetry Forum Military Wing[/i]

James so your poem would be

Pom - french word
for Englishman,
meaning potato head
and its not little
its big

Ohh, I see - that's what pom means. A poem that's also a definition very helpful.

running running
boom - crash
big boy cries
mommy flies
little boy in arms
snuggle in

haiku

alone in our sleep
my body moves as you breath
your hand over hip


Cinquain (same moment)

alone
sleep silent still
I'll warm your feet with mine
my body moving as you breath
for me

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are

Wed Mar 05, 2008

Tell me that I'm good,
...that you love me and will take care of me.
Don't smother me,
...let me run, but sleep close to me at night.
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its ok

here I mourn this tiny form
skeleton: Neanderthal child
sunken holes in ashen bone
her teeth so large and wild

why

hi jimbo. I mourn the skeleton because even though she lived several thousand years ago, it was still the death of a child. And I was feeling a grand version of motherhood yesterday.

Manna, Iiked your 'grand version of motherhood'. I am thinking of skeletons today, how the act of dying can transform a living breathing person into a skeleton before they reach the grave.

ich sehe dich
enclosed in paper skin
laid out on a child’s bed

ich bin bei dir
our hands clasp tightly
the anguish of parting

Carol

Written quickly after reading Goethe, like the first verse better than the second.

i see