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Surrender

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:24 pm
by Undertow
Forget everything you know and trust
In the trinity of love, lechery & lust
Believe and doubt the power of fate
Witness your heart and mind grate

You touch the strings and evoke thoughts
You have long since forgot or fought
Images of shining sun, moon and stars
Before you watched them through bars


Wide open to honest criticism and thank you for reading.