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Violet wrote:so drink your blood now
'tis but the dawn that baits us
let's fly to great heights

let's fly to great heights
deep here do we dwell, so it
would make a nice change

would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

would make a nice change
if you'd just cut me some slack
not always a hack

Violet wrote:would make a nice change
if you'd just cut me some slack
not always a hack

not always a hack
can be just cutting instead
removing dead hearts

removing dead hearts
at least they are bloody dead
cutting tongue instead

OHhhh... I like mine better [or at least where it could end up], posted just one minute before yours, Violet:

would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

Violet wrote:removing dead hearts
at least they are bloody dead
cutting tongue instead

cutting tongue instead
drew blood whilst I gave you head
was just a small prick

was just a small prick?
your tomb suggests otherwise
don't ruin my fun

Violet wrote:was just a small prick?
your tomb suggests otherwise
don't ruin my fun

don't ruin my fun
damental spiritual
belief in nothing

belief in nothing
that's too easy councilor
give another try

Violet wrote:belief in nothing
that's too easy councilor
give another try

give another try
no, I choose not to do so
goodbye for ever

goodbye forever
seems a long long time, my lord
as long as that tomb...

lizzytysh wrote:would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

getting back to the original sequence:

compassion revealed
in a lady's acceptance
silk purse from sow's ear

... oh, sorry Lizzy... I totally missed that I'd missed your post... wasn't sure what you were talking about.. then, well, his lordship picked up... anyway, apologies to all for my part in this multi-syllabic travesty...

v i o l e t

No problem, Violet. I knew you didn't see it, as I also knew which one you'd have gone with, had you realized there was a choice.

As always, Anne carried it to the higher road.


~ Lizzy