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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2002 3:53 pm
by eeey
Don't talk rot, George.
Filth often disguises itself as something holy. But the "Divine" never masquerades as filth.
eeey
To eeey
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 12:59 am
by George.Wright
and the apes with angel glands inseminated themselves????????
the Gods made love with the mortals
Georges
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 10:29 pm
by eeey
What can I say, George.
You've got a mind like a steel trap.
eeey
To eeey
Posted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 2:02 pm
by George.Wright
I like to think of myself as a free thinker, the trap is not a good analogy.
Georges
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:09 am
by Daniel Petersen
Hi peter
Such a great work. I tend to take my words about you back.
Art true art
Daniel
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:58 am
by peter danielsen
Thanks daniel, somehow I always believed we would meet. You see maybe we are not that different afterall. Some part of me is like you, and some part of you is like me. And some part of me is like the lovely young woman whom I think I am in love with. She has long dark hair, and just breeze across the floor when you see her. She is deeply poetic in the wild erotic and tender way. Shes got rage and sorrow. She is intelligent and vonourable and full of knowledge of her own potentiality. There is great hope for the world. I see that a star has been unified by two hearts again. I smell the scent of thunder, I see the bright light through the clouds. Help me God dont let the high ones laugh.
Peter
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 5:25 pm
by mickey_one
*I will be glad if anyone could give me a hint if anything is wrong*
Yes, the poem is junk both according to my tatse and yours as well.
In English it is junk.
Pa Dansk ogsa, tror Jeg (sorry, no Danish punctuation on this keyboard)
In any language it is junk.
For minor league trolling you deserve 1 out of 10.
Farvel, tousand tak (ikke)
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 8:16 pm
by peter danielsen
took my diamond to the pawshop
but that dont make it junk
Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 8:52 pm
by Rachel
I'm sorry but alone the stage directions don't work in this poem. How can the nice-little-girl whisper in such a predicament?
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 4:51 pm
by Daniel Petersen
The question is should she
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 7:07 pm
by Rachel
In certain circles it might be seen as rude or even dangerous
Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 4:14 pm
by Daniel Petersen
yes, taking a piss might be seen as rude in some circles. But the real dangerous people are the aestehics, who slaughter to preserve their static tradition. These persons are the flappy liars who judge others, but in doing so, they prepare for themselves the path to hell. This offcourse is no judgement
daniel
Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:21 am
by Taigaku
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:23 am
by Taigaku
PS This, surely, must be blasphemous, Peter?
"And you're screamin: release me
go on and go on
as you join in the night
the spirit, the son"
Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 4:33 pm
by peter danielsen
"PS This, surely, must be blasphemous, Peter?"
-"I would not know...but did you report?"
-"You say I took the name in vain...but whats it to you?"
-"when you kneel below me...my manhood in your mouth?