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Andrew,

Yes, I sensed your frustration in that last post of yours. Thus, I felt that our 'playing' in your thread may not have been conducive to the rewrite.

If/when you find a way to beat that pome into submission, I'm sure all of us would love to see it.

Linda.

Dear Linda-lakeside,
you wrote "find a way to beat that pome into submission" (sic)
Thanks for your reply: I guess that's what's required .
Beyond the imaginative distractions (i.e . the 3DBs), and my current inability to complete a frustrating "Heroes", it will be finished when it's ready for me.
As aye,
Andrew.

Hello Andrew,

it will be finished when it's ready for me.

I guess that's the only way it can work. As for the 3DBs, I doubt you'll be seeing such a spectacle again. Try singing to your poem, it may relax and come to you.

Linda.

Yes, yes, Andrew. If you search for it long enough it will find you.

To quote myself (How to Get a Poem)...

"A peaceful calm will rise
like steam upon a lake
when poem and poet both agree
on the road they both must take."

It Is a collaboration!

L

I think it should be 'mist' upon a lake. That was my crit. You're welcome. I'll leave now.

Linda.

Thanks Lakeside~

Hmmm, you ARE a "lake" expert. I will def consider the change.

L

L & L -

hot lakes do steam. But usually they're not very peaceful, then.

Cheers
tom

Tom~

It is past my bedtime

I live next to 2 man-made lakes (well right up the hill from them).
They are definately cold, but do 'steam' when the morning sun comes up and 'mists' their surface with an "offspring of fog" on a cool, clear morning. It IS peaceful! Dammit (hahaha)

Laurie