The Infinite Haiku
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snow, death-masks autumn
untill spring hides your faces
sleep now oh loved one
untill spring hides your faces
sleep now oh loved one
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
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sleep now oh loved one
mornings light waits for your breath
as stars keep sentry
mornings light waits for your breath
as stars keep sentry
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as stars keep sentry
dark orange moon arises
autumn fills the sky
Thanks, D.
dark orange moon arises
autumn fills the sky
Thanks, D.
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"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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whoops! sorry, I will rejoin once I emerge from the Thick Kids' Corner. Also, it is obvious that Lion of Lions meant school massacres being traditional because you have so many of them over there. When the school doesn't allow it then the Law says that the gunman has to move to the nearest mall.lizzytysh wrote:mickey_one ~ The previous entry's last line is supposed to be carried over to be your first line... you get another chance(please note that the last person misspelt mascara).
~ Lizzy
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Looks like "time out" is about over for you.whoops! sorry, I will rejoin once I emerge from the Thick Kids' Corner.
YepAlso, it is obvious that Lion of Lions meant school massacres being traditional because you have so many of them over there.

Just woke up. Looks like that may be the best time for black humour for me, since it brought an involuntary, silent laugh, in spite of myself.When the school doesn't allow it then the Law says that the gunman has to move to the nearest mall.
Okay, "time out"'s over. Back to Infinite Haiku. Your turn, unless someone else gets there first.
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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Off to Thick Kids' Corner with you Lizzy. The rule being that the second line has 7 syllables.lizzytysh wrote:as stars keep sentry
orange moon arises
autumn fills the sky
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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Martine wrote:autumn fills the sky
the shy seconds before daybreak
light is but a hope
light is butter hope
though margarine is lighter
olive oil also
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Hi Jack ~
I'll go there if I must, but someone else brought this to my attention, privately. This was my explanation:
O range moon a ris es
OR
Or ange moon a ris es
LOL ~ Oh, schoot. Can you still hear me with my back turned?? Hey... I was in a hurry, alright? Had to get to the vet before they closed at Noon. I counted six ~ I tell you SIX ~ every time I counted!! Somehow, six transposed to seven in my mind, though. I thought they were awfully, magically, close to one another in length.
Not to worry. As soon as I work my way outta this corner [sometime tonight, since I have a whole new list of things to do], I'll edit it, since it won't change the first line of the next person's. Geesh! You'd think I didn't know how to count.
~ Lizzy
I'll go there if I must, but someone else brought this to my attention, privately. This was my explanation:
O range moon a ris es
OR
Or ange moon a ris es
LOL ~ Oh, schoot. Can you still hear me with my back turned?? Hey... I was in a hurry, alright? Had to get to the vet before they closed at Noon. I counted six ~ I tell you SIX ~ every time I counted!! Somehow, six transposed to seven in my mind, though. I thought they were awfully, magically, close to one another in length.
Not to worry. As soon as I work my way outta this corner [sometime tonight, since I have a whole new list of things to do], I'll edit it, since it won't change the first line of the next person's. Geesh! You'd think I didn't know how to count.
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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Olive oil alsomickey_one wrote:
light is butter hope
though margarine is lighter
olive oil also
cloaks the virgin pressed against
the restaurant door
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
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the restaurant door
opens on a theatre
of warring couples
opens on a theatre
of warring couples
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William wrote:the restaurant door
opens on a theatre
of warring couples
of warring couples
and compromise, the robin
warbles his sad song
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warbles his sad song
as if to say, once there was
love and good times too
as if to say, once there was
love and good times too
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
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love and good times toodamellon wrote:warbles his sad song
as if to say, once there was
love and good times too
equals four maidens so true
watching yon robin
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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watching yon Robin
in the hundred acre wood
I see A.A.Milne
in the hundred acre wood
I see A.A.Milne
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver