Mary's Last Legs.

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Andrew McGeever
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Post by Andrew McGeever »

Second stanza, second line, second word.
Omit "rainbow" and insert " blackened".

I'll present an edited version of this on-going farrago after a cigarette and a cup of tea....

tomorrow, honest, I promise.

She isn't well.

Andrew.
Andrew McGeever
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Post by Andrew McGeever »

It should read "delete", as opposed to "omit".
It's easy to be fussy in the sadness; we do it all the time. It's called addressing matters, as I'm led to believe....so far

Andrew.
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