Church Street
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John,
That sounds like an interesting site you go to. Thus far, this is the only forum I've been in. I bet there's literally thousands that deal specifically with songwriting or creative writing in all its forms. I think I'll check it out, to see what happens. I like to see 'works in progress'. It's interesting the changes that are made (not always for the best - but that's a matter of opinioin), but certainly the crits in general can be nothing but helpful. Plus, the more you write, the better you get. Then there's the aspect of learning thru others mistakes (before you make those same mistakes). Good stuff all around.
Linda.
That sounds like an interesting site you go to. Thus far, this is the only forum I've been in. I bet there's literally thousands that deal specifically with songwriting or creative writing in all its forms. I think I'll check it out, to see what happens. I like to see 'works in progress'. It's interesting the changes that are made (not always for the best - but that's a matter of opinioin), but certainly the crits in general can be nothing but helpful. Plus, the more you write, the better you get. Then there's the aspect of learning thru others mistakes (before you make those same mistakes). Good stuff all around.
Linda.
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I thought I would mention for those forum old-timers who had been curious about what this sounded like, that it can be heard on my website. Sorry it took almost four years, my baby steps forward can be rather irritating.
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He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
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He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
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Re: Church Street
I like this, reminded me of Church Street in San Francisco.
Anunitu
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I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you.
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Thank you both!
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He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
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Hello John,
Well, it seems baby steps work, just a little slower than a full gallop! I liked Church Street very much - I don't like to make comparisons, but I will anyway.
Naturally, at the beginning I felt that old Dylan vibe, then it morphed into a John Prine kind of thing...but it's definitely yours all the way. It was very nicely done.
I have to tell the truth on Democracy, and that is, I'm not terribly keen on Leonard covers. With a few exceptions (Hallelujah) of course. But, the lyrics are so powerful that one does have to have a listen. Again kudos for even getting this far. I've had a beautiful guitar for about a year now, but I've yet to master it.
But, Church Street is a beautiful song - kudos for taking your baby steps. I like your blog as well.
Linda.
Well, it seems baby steps work, just a little slower than a full gallop! I liked Church Street very much - I don't like to make comparisons, but I will anyway.

I have to tell the truth on Democracy, and that is, I'm not terribly keen on Leonard covers. With a few exceptions (Hallelujah) of course. But, the lyrics are so powerful that one does have to have a listen. Again kudos for even getting this far. I've had a beautiful guitar for about a year now, but I've yet to master it.


Linda.
~ The smell of perfume in the air, bits of beauty everywhere ~ Leonard Cohen.
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Thanks Linda...I'm reminded looking at the thread that you had liked the lyric on it's own, so I'm glad you liked it with music too. And any comparison to John Prine is a huge compliment!linda_lakeside wrote:Hello John,
Well, it seems baby steps work, just a little slower than a full gallop! I liked Church Street very much - I don't like to make comparisons, but I will anyway.Naturally, at the beginning I felt that old Dylan vibe, then it morphed into a John Prine kind of thing...but it's definitely yours all the way. It was very nicely done.
I have to tell the truth on Democracy, and that is, I'm not terribly keen on Leonard covers. With a few exceptions (Hallelujah) of course. But, the lyrics are so powerful that one does have to have a listen. Again kudos for even getting this far. I've had a beautiful guitar for about a year now, but I've yet to master it.But, Church Street is a beautiful song - kudos for taking your baby steps. I like your blog as well.
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Linda.
I love to speak with John
He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
http://www.johnkloberdanz.com
He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
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John K.
Thanks for this – your song is timely and lovely – my offer still stands
(Sorry for the emoticon, Lovely Linda L.)
(John K. – Don't panic, I'm only kidding!)
Thanks for this – your song is timely and lovely – my offer still stands

(John K. – Don't panic, I'm only kidding!)
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Gulp!imaginary friend wrote:John K.
Thanks for this – your song is timely and lovely – my offer still stands(Sorry for the emoticon, Lovely Linda L.)
(John K. – Don't panic, I'm only kidding!)
Um, no panicking, but now that I've met you I'm blushing even more than last time....
Thank you for the nice compliment, it means alot!
John
I love to speak with John
He's a pundit and a fraud
He's a lazy banker living in a suit
http://www.johnkloberdanz.com
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He's a lazy banker living in a suit
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Well, I can't listen to it until later, when I have sound capability.
~ Lizzy
It's really good to see you, Red Poppy. Your name came up the other day and I didn't realize you have appeared... I wondered out loud what had happened to you and where you were. I hope everything is going well for you. Are you still doing performances of your play?Red Poppy on Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:56 pm
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you.Red Poppy
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Thanks LIzzy.
Have been working hard on a novel that comes out in May.
Financial cuts have hit our theatre work but maybe in September we'll get back on the road.
John
Have been working hard on a novel that comes out in May.
Financial cuts have hit our theatre work but maybe in September we'll get back on the road.
John