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Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:06 am
by Karren B
Thank you hophead...I really hope it works out too (I think we both do)!
By the way, beware of all fishy things and Ironing fanatics!
Karren B
xx
Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:44 am
by fishfishquaileye
hophead wrote:I really like the honesty of this poem. We all do what we must do to get through. Judgement is for jerks, I hope this works out in your favor.
Jerks are for judges
unfit fishy bastards
sentence you to 20
press-ups
are for ironers
Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:16 am
by lizzytysh
Where the heck is the Like button for after I read your comment at the bottom of page 1, hophead!
Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 7:47 am
by hophead
lizzytysh wrote:Where the heck is the Like button for after I read your comment at the bottom of page 1, hophead!
in our hearts, hopefully...
Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:31 pm
by lizzytysh
Yes, it is there...
Re: My absent valentine
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:18 pm
by Cate
love your new boots pic
I could see this as a song Karren. There are moments of vulnerability/self doubt Karren, that I think we all have but may not be comfortable exposing. Aside from structure and metre and all that jazz that you do well, I think that one of the things that you often bring forth with your pieces is that vulnerability.
I feel like I know how your N. feels, not in that specific way, but that questioning – of ‘what am I doing? and why am I still doing this?’. I wish I had advice for you but I don’t. I'm happy that everything seems right again and that your Valentine did arrive.
ohh the math … the advice wasn’t to ‘do the math’, it was to, ‘do math’ (actual math) and was advice given to me by Greg who I believe had a math agenda.