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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 7:52 am
by linda_lakeside
Whew! That was close. I was very impressed with the second poem. Concise.
Seems all have left for their burrows. Burroughs. 'Nite all.
Linda.
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 8:11 am
by LaurieAK
tom & linda~
Yes. I see what you two are talking about now. All day on the computer has got me loopy.
Repost.
I see the light.
It is amazingly concise.
So is the word "sweet."
toodles,
L
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 8:43 am
by ilang
hello?
March 12th was the birthdate of Jack Kerouac, as such I decided to "repost" an old poem from early last year.
Thanks for the comments kids! Although I must confess I haven't the slightest clue what you folks are talking about!
See ya...
babe
peace
ISL
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 9:16 am
by tom.d.stiller
ilang wrote:Thanks for the comments kids! Although I must confess I haven't the slightest clue what you folks are talking about!
Your poem, chum!
Until now we reached agreement on the line breaks that go with "Babe"...
Good to know, however, someone else is still "on the road" to "satori in paris".
You didn't answer my question, though, about the Neil Young reference, not that you have to, of course...
Cheers
tom