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Dear Geoffrey...

(I don't know why but I seem to be feel comfier typing as if I am writing a letter to you - which is something that I can't say about many people to be honest - though I'll let you judge whether that is a pleasant or unpleasant thing )

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Alsiony wrote:
>You are a wonderful story-teller


the best

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Frankly this is disturbing G.
Not the part where ‘Geoffrey’ molests a priest, although I did find the thermal underwear with a strange smell image a bit – confusing to the senses.
No, I’m disturbed by the items you keep in your pocket catechism – scrapes of paper, a bit of keratin (I mean really a preserved piece of somebodies body? eek), a creepy bug and of course the deformed clover (not just any plant – a Trifolium - tri as in the holly trinity itself, except this one so carefully preserved by you, was mutated/deformed and had 4 leaves )

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Monday morning edit - I was just teasing of course and hoping for a rise. my favourite part was actually the eyelash and the items in the book. I was fascinated with the small details and you held my attention throughout. It was interesting how the attentional information regarding scent and attire added a disturbing taste to a well written erotic moment (I was half revolted and half turned on).

even our old German Shephard would not tread on ants!