Page 2 of 2

Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 5:11 am
by Casey Butler
Bambi?

The Avatar's name is "Rudolf". He doesn't have a mother.

Casey

Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:56 pm
by Red Poppy
I know - she got shot by a flying poem,
and now the poor beggar's without a home,
destined forever to wander alone,
with a head full of wobbly (to be pronounced wobb-e-ly) bone.

Eureka, I've writed a pome.................

Comments please but only positives. I can't take the rest :lol: :roll: :cry:

Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:20 pm
by Cate
A fine poem Red Poppy.
A tragic story brought to rhyme.

Cate

Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:45 pm
by Red Poppy
Thank you Cate - you just confirmed my own high opinion of the piece :lol: