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Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 5:11 am
by Casey Butler
Bambi?
The Avatar's name is "Rudolf". He doesn't have a mother.
Casey
Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:56 pm
by Red Poppy
I know - she got shot by a flying poem,
and now the poor beggar's without a home,
destined forever to wander alone,
with a head full of wobbly (to be pronounced wobb-e-ly) bone.
Eureka, I've writed a pome.................
Comments please but only positives. I can't take the rest

Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:20 pm
by Cate
A fine poem Red Poppy.
A tragic story brought to rhyme.
Cate
Re: This Odd New Weight Called Freedom
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:45 pm
by Red Poppy
Thank you Cate - you just confirmed my own high opinion of the piece
