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(2 disqualified: "satasfies" - misspelled, "Jerry Garcia, Bob Weir" - miscounted)

mickey_one wrote:that comes once a year
but this comes multiple times
which satisfies more?

which satisfies more:
'for something like a second',
or just once a year?

~greg wrote:(2 disqualified: "satasfies" - misspelled, "Jerry Garcia, Bob Weir" - miscounted)

mickey_one wrote:that comes once a year
but this comes multiple times
which satisfies more?

which satisfies more:
'for something like a second',
or just once a year?

or just once a year
Greg asks lasciviously
late to the party

~greg wrote:(2 disqualified: "satasfies" - misspelled, "Jerry Garcia, Bob Weir" - miscounted)

mickey_one wrote:that comes once a year
but this comes multiple times
which satisfies more?

which satisfies more:
'for something like a second',
or just once a year?

I didn't call Jimbo on spelling, come on now! "Jerry Garcia Bob Weir"- is that not 7 syllaby? I hereby undisqualify Jimbo and me but disqualify you on Grounds of Revenge.

Wouldn't it be syllabi?

I think it may depend on how one pronounces Weir. I pronounce it weer... however, Greg may pronounce it wy er?


~ Lizzy

"Jerry Garcia Bob Weir"- is that not 7 syllaby?

Yeah I guess.

I guess I was pronoucing and counting the comma, which you have here
perfidiously removed just to prove your trival point.

all I've ever learned from love was how to shoot somebody who outdrew ya

ps: sposd to be 5, no?

nothing like haiku
I disqualify you all
perfidiously

~greg wrote:

"Jerry Garcia Bob Weir"- is that not 7 syllaby?

Yeah I guess.

I guess I was pronoucing and counting the comma, which you have here
perfidiously removed just to prove your trival point.

all I've ever learned from love was how to shoot somebody who outdrew ya

ps: sposd to be 5, no?

apparently 5 7 5 O Disqualified one.

apparently five
fingers on a monkey's paw
just like mickey-one

just like micky one
but nothing like ours me thinks
he dont have fingers?

jimbo wrote:just like micky one
but nothing like ours me thinks
he dont have fingers?

he don't have fingers
yet he plays her body like
a virtuoso

a virtuoso
but a vice is better so
sin in style my firend

mickey_one wrote:a virtuoso
but a vice is better so
sin in style my firend

'sin in style', my friend
the designer said, drawing
an enquiring look

an enquiring look
across the smoke filled bar room
promises fullfilled

promises fullfilled
in the tiny little ways
we meet each other

We meet each other
Like mid winter shadows will
our Unnoticed joy