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What!?! I wasn't!?! Oh, noooooo.... LOL

Can't wait to see Jimbo's next contribution .



~ Lizzy

Jimbo

I really do like the 'wet women' one. Dump the churchy ones, this is more fun. Can I have it for my Christmas present? You would need to give it a title, but apart from that I love it as it is.

Sorry about ignoring yours Lizzy, but Jimbo took me by surprise and I love surprises.
Your haiku - I liked the first version best. I can say no more because what I know about poetry would fit in a haiku.

because what I know about poetry would fit in a haiku.

Well said for me, too .

No problem on ignoring mine... I'm still working on it, anyway. Lunchtime driving brought a few more ideas. Oh, dear... if I end up with the first version, there may be a lesson there . If it ain't broke, don't fix it?

I also wouldn't want to come between you and your Christmas present . All naked and tied up with a bow... .

Okay, I've driven myself crazy enough for now with different endings and beginnings. Gotta give it a rest. How's that Goddess poem coming along? I saw that Manna added another rendition .

Okay, driven myself crazy enough with my would-be haiku for now. Poor Leonard with all of his songs and writing . I'm just trying to get a haiku to feel right, and haven't even gotten to its being right!


~ Lizzy

well Ihad to walk my dog
or she walked me
on our sandy beach
where she runs free

trying to clear my
head of naked
skin'
and sin sin sin.

have fun jimbo

Your stuck in those
shadows Liz Beth
and you need
to come out

into the moonlite
with me
cause the cats
asleep......................

for liz

Oh what's with the sin stuff, Jimbo? You still have me in fits of laughter at the bath scene. Thank you.

sorry so am i

what is it you want Dame
the four steamy
verses.

you got it
you name it

lol jimbo

I was just thinking on my way home how my cat sitting silently in the shadows didn't hold a candle to all that splish-splashin' in the tub .

I like your ditty about walking your dog.

Thanks for your poem for me.

Now... get busy for the Babe .


~ Lizzy

ok just one more fecking lulaby.
got to get some
sleep
after long
hard
day


good njight fecking
girls


Ihope dangermouse is not about.

Icant remember if
the bath was hot
an ladies warm,

or the ladies hot
on my warm
sweet soul'

after three long
years of no Ladys
in my bath or fucking

Iwas lost in a place
where the angels
dont sing,

and i laughed
again
cause fun i had,

the midnight sun
ye two strange ladys
in the midnight sun.

Iwas lost in the
place
where the angels
dont sing

and i laughed
again
cause i had some
fun

in the midnight sun
ye two strange
women
in the
midnight sun.

... and there you have it .

Goodnight, Jimbo . Now I'm off to find my cat in the shadows . See you tomorrow . You, too, Damellon ... or was that Bawdy Babe . [Whoops... just looked it up ~ more intense than my intention, but I lose the alliteration, otherwise... what to do, what to do ]


~ Lizzy

Well Jimbo - you gave some fun and you got some fun. Thanks for the gift of the verses. Goodnight from a strange woman.

... and don't forget the title and frame, Jimbo. Christmas is right around the corner and Dame Damellon awaits.

Yeah, strange woman sounds better. Guess I might as well own up, too. Since innocence was lost...

Well Jimbo - you gave some fun and you got some fun.

Thanks for making that point, Damellon. Ditto to you both.


~ Lizzy

have fun jimbo