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who will follow me
so clearly Harry S will
concerned to show self

Be myself, I is
Be yourself, everyone is
Already taken

lizzytysh wrote:who will follow me
so clearly Harry S will
concerned to show self

concerned to show self
ish writing by Lizzy,he
sacrificed himself

Be yourself, you is
everyone else is taken
sod it, to the pub...

sod it, to the pub...
Harry with thee indulging
old posts and haiku

Old posts and haiku
never never never die
they just flail away

they just flail away
birds caught in hurricane's wind
just trying to stay

Alexandra Scarlet wrote:She was definitely one our best poets and I looked forward to her haiku.

er..thanks, Mom

just trying to stay
clear of child abuse adver-
tised as poetry...

[must I recall the hobnailed boot "haiku"? an unwanted gift from Geoffrey, among the ordinary porn, the ugly words and and the parsed bleatings of sad old goats. If these were pictures or videos, would they not be removed by the moderators? I try and fail to imagine the rigid minds that see "gentle cliches" and who can only think of one way to respond: verbal vandalism ]

just trying to stay
clear of child abuse adver-
tised as poetry...

'tised as poetry...?
No more teasing allowed 'tween
consenting adults?

anneporter wrote:
> can only think of one way to respond . . .


Could that be because 'thinking' is not your forte? That would explain why you are quite active in this Infinite Haiku thread, "the resting home for those who have given up on proper writing" - as Harry put it. I am here to tidy up, single-handedly if need be. Hence the bleatings of a 'sad old goat' - you cliche-infested priggish wasp.

imaginary friend wrote:

just trying to stay
clear of child abuse adver-
tised as poetry...

'tised as poetry...?
No more teasing allowed 'tween
consenting adults?

consenting adults
approved by anne or lizzy
just clique and cliché

IF I presume it's a gender thing but I notice that anne whilst rushing to condemn the animal perversion haiku she did not understand, did not comment on your dominatrix haiku. I must give you a compliment before I disappear, your writing, even on this dead thread, has always sparkled and stood out from the easy blandness that haiku encourages.

just clique and cliche
will be so boring to read
come back Harry S

tinderella wrote:just clique and cliche
will be so boring to read
come back Harry S

come back Harry S
you can "get over yourself"
but not over me


Farewell, Tinderella, Queen of all Ireland