i am

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LauraL
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i am

Post by LauraL »

i am



i knelt at the altar

of my Mother's god,

danced in sheer joy

at my Father's tree.

one foot in each world,

a journey of discovery

this circle of life begins

and ends within me.


LauraL
(littlecrow)
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

littlecrow feb/07
dangermouse
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Re: i am

Post by dangermouse »

COOL LAURA.
I love the way you've taken all these cliches and woven them into something that isn't at all cliched.
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