Life and you

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Sandra
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Life and you

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life is with you
life is without you
life is you
life is all but you
I live life with and without you
what a strange life I live
I cannot live with you
and I cannot live without you
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mat james
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Post by mat james »

:?
It sounds as though you are in love with a married man, Sandra.
Don't let Geoffrey hear about it or you are in for a mouthful :wink:

Matj
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Interesting, Mat... you may be right. I read it as simply representing the turmoil of some relationships... it reads much more 'clearly' in the context of your literal interpretation, though.


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Post by Sandra »

:lol: ...no I have always evaded married men....it is just a problem of distance....but exagerated in the writing!!
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Post by lizzytysh »

:lol: You didn't hesitate to get that clarified, did you, Sandra :wink: ? I hadn't even considered distance and, yes, it makes total sense in that way; and moreso than the way I was interpreting it. Thanks!


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