A Tuesday Afternoon

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SlightlyD
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A Tuesday Afternoon

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JiminyC
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I like this SlightlyD, a real mixture of innocence and the loss of on a Tuesday afternoon; or perhaps after reading it again, no innocence at all. Very nice, "You only pay for the sins you don't commit", how this riddles the mind with differing ideas; post modern teenage affection captured quite beautifully, thank you, 'n merry xmas.
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