In Travenous

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Johny Goldsmith
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In Travenous

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http://www.irishmirror.ie/news/weird-ne ... ch-5198354

Read about my Cat! Think about how Cat begins with a C, and so does Cohen! What are the odds of that!

My cat is called Pepper, close to an anagram of "poetry". What are the odds of that!


In travenous
my Life Blood
muzak and poetry
In tavernas of
Old Greece
Drachmala stalks the currency alleyways
where Lovers and
friends we have yet meet
light my darkness
like Leonard lightens my lode

copyright 2013 Johnny Goldsmith
Cate
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Re: In Travenous

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You have a very cool cat - perhaps she was a football player in her last life

I feel like I'm possibly missing a word play with travenous (I don't know what that is a stupid google thinks I'm hungry, maybe that's the word play) - I like the middle a bunch, I don't like the last word as I'm dirty minded and an unpleasant image popped into my head.
Johny Goldsmith
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Re: In Travenous

Post by Johny Goldsmith »

My cat is wonderful
It is like a cratue like no others
It has control of my home
Like a Genome
In Leonard we hear
"The stories of the Street are mine"
Form your Chronicler
Extraordinaire
You hear
"The stories of the Cat are mine"
He is lie a Demi-God
Leonard would understand my depths
Of emotion and feelings
Do you understand?
My cat cost me 358 Drachmas
In th good old days
The Mayor once said to me
In a grudging tone of syrup and stale figs
"Yes, I suppose ithat price is ok"
That's no way to say "good buy"
Sideways
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Re: In Travenous

Post by Sideways »

How lovely to see you, Johnny.


Your poem is

C ohen connected
R eally powerful
A n example to us all
P oetry Gold


Do visit us again soon, I think we are free 2020, or even a little later at 9 o'clock
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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