New Year

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lonndubh
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New Year

Post by lonndubh »

A crispy new year
More than calenders and kisses
Bring that Word
Feed your Hungers

Dont bite
At tomorrows Ration
The hands of Time
Have their own
Work to do

Why live
beyond this second.
Resolve
To Breath
Life
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Cate
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Re: New Year

Post by Cate »

I enjoyed your new years poem.
I like how you've personified Hungers.

Happy New Year Lonndubh
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Karren B
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Re: New Year

Post by Karren B »

Nice poem lonndubh
Resolve
To Breath
Life
like the last line!

Happy New Year!
Karren B
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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