Oh, Yes!!

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carm
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Oh, Yes!!

Post by carm »

'-a---ha' is much like the
'Sunflower weary of time'.
Every time I hear -a---ha's voice
it seems to say
Now! with a crash
of cymbals!
Very pleased
and positive
and absolutely delighting
its own round brightness.

Sorry, Elizabeth, sorry Blake!
But, now I see what you mean.
Like the sunflower, when
Storms and frost batter
-a---ha's bright delight
and though '-a---ha' is still upright
nothing could say dejection
more than -a---ha's weary
disillusioned
hanging head.

"Just having some FUN!" :razz:
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Marisha
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Re: Oh, Yes!!

Post by Marisha »

no need to be so negative.
carm
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Re: Oh, Yes!!

Post by carm »

Like the bottom line reads…
"Just having some FUN! :D
carm
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Re: Oh, Yes!!

Post by carm »

And besides, if this were about you, then you'd have reason to complain!

This is a poem based on a fictitious somebody I've decided to call _a___ha!
carm
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Re: Oh, Yes!!

Post by carm »

On a more positive note…

A sunflower somehow remembers
to turn its hanging head
towards the sun's warm embrace.
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