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[anunitu]

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[Sideways]

it's a bit rude to post only 10 poems as you join a new group. surely you should post a minimum of 20 or better still 56, or even 178?

it's a shame that since 1993 you haven't notice the spelling errors or the inconsistent use of cases in your otherwise profound piece.


btw have you written any poems about ironing?


kind regards

Sue

[anunitu]

One thing you should know about this poem, it came from real life experience..I didn't conceive it in my mind, I lived the actuality of it.

Anunitu

[Sideways]

One thing you should know about this poem, it came from real life experience..I didn't conceive it in my mind, I lived the actuality of it.

Anunitu

and one thing you should know about posting poems, one at a time if you want people to read them!


and one other thing, just because they come from real life doesn't allow you to be lazy with spelling or grammar.


good luck

Sue

[~greg]

you need therapy anunitu:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fbpv7IUTm5k

[Sideways]

you need therapy anunitu:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fbpv7IUTm5k

he has to be a wind-up. how can anyone write poems like that and post them in bulk. I find the writing offensive and the submissions offensive. he is not a child as he has been copyrighting his valuable work for many years.


did you notice the change between "Children" and "children" in the same verse?

[~greg]

he is not a child

is that iron-y?
are you - can you possibly be - the same sue .... ?

did you notice the change between "Children" and "children" in the same verse?

no. i didn't read it.
should i have?

[anunitu]

As far as I can tell, the above is in Croatian..as shown by the below link. I have no idea of its translation.

http://www.eudict.com/?lang=croeng&word ... &go=Search

Anunitu

[Sideways]

potiskanje, tako lepo temo dobro delovno mesto

I checked it out with an on-line Ironing translator and it means

" a pot of ham, take a leopard time doubts delicatessen Master", on the one hand it can't be poetry as it doesn't include any mention of "soul" but on the other hand it does include "Master" so it must be poetry. Very confusing. It reminds me of the 2001 Semi-Professional Speed Ironing Regional Semi-Finals when the monkey-butlers laid out a mixed pile of nylon and raylon! How we laughed!

[anunitu]

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[Sideways]

This is a picture of my son





He resembles myself at his age(33)

Attached is a Photo of me.

You are an absolute hunk!!! UNfortunately your son's photo won't open but if he is half as good-looking as his Dad then he can iron my sheets any time!!

Love

Sue